LOL!
I usually hate raps but this made me chuckle a bit. Liked the guy in the background going "Newgrounds" every few seconds. Your voice was a little quiet at times but still really funny and nice to listen to.
1st review, 9/10, 4/5, fun but I wouldn't care to listen to it more than once unfortunately
Agree with them
The loop, while most loops are intended as quiet backgrounds, could easily be tweaked into a very nice song. I also agree that you may want to consider bringing in more layers sooner if you are considering making this a more in-depth piece. I liked it a lot though and it looped fantasticly so you get an extra point for that.
3rd review, 9/10, 5/5. A nice piece that could become a GREAT piece with minor adjustments.
nice pump too it
I love when music has you bobbing your head to the beat, this song does that for me. It doesn't loop perfectly but that is easily overlooked compared to the rest of the song. If you had noted the song as a "song" I wouldn't have cared. Really nice bass/pump but I do agree with Glosmetal that at least at some point it could have had one last jolt of energy or layer in it. Still it's way better than anything I could make at present time so grats.
4th review, 9/10, 5/5, nice little song that would do well in a space themed flash, perhaps a music video in some regard because the occasional snare sounds like a hiss of gas coming off a space ship or something. Nice job
Agree with the last guy but then again
I will agree that the song is slow starting, but I also see you intended this as what you call "Light trance". I think it is done very true to that vision. It is light, picks up to keep your attention when it needs it most, relaxes again, then blasts again. I find it very professional in that regard because most techno and trance I hear from pro artists make their songs very much the same way. Really enjoyed it, grats man!
2nd review, 9/10, 5/5. A nice little respite from the heavy stuff. Cheers!
thanks ^^
totally could see a music video for this
if I had any artistic talent at all I would beg to make a music video for this, but I don't so I won't. I agree with your vision here of a person in a school building, that's what I'd make a video of. Really was a nice song. I can't believe you consider yourself a begginer at this, I wish I had that kind of talent in the future.
1st review, 10/10, 5/5. You gotta find someone to use this in a video or something!
wow! thanks a bunch!
this really is the first actual song ive recorded.
funny you should say music video, i would TOTALLY make one.... if i had flash that is, i got the free trial, then somehow got it to last 60 days, ive got 5 days left and im working on a music video at the moment, only problem is, its last week of 8th grade, so im crammed with finals, its IMPOSSIBLE.
thanks for the listen and kind words!
WOOOOOOOOOOOO!
That was awesome! Perfect loop! Loved the part at 21 when things go dead silent and suddenly intense. Everything was great. Can not wait for the full version. The title has me confused however, are you planning to use this in an RPG or something?
1st review 11/10 (if possible), 5/5, downloaded That was my favorite loop I've ever heard in my time here on NG.
Yep, I plan to use this in my RPG that I'm creating, so maybe I'll just make a full version here and cut myself a loopable one. Or release both. I don't know :S
Thanks for your kind review!
...whoa
that was kinda weird. It's a Barney song so I obviously had doubts, but you took it to a nice little beat and the end result is a nice little audio clip. I can't say I love it because one, it's not my kind of music unfortunately, and two, seemed a little repetitive. Overall I think people are going to just whale zeros on this cause its a Barney song, which is a shame because it's a nice song and for some reason I see popular hip-hop artists singing this and it becoming a hit...not bad at all.
1st review, 8/10, 4/5 nice take on a semi-classic
I can dig it!
wow, you say this is your first shot at this kind of music. Could've fooled me. I like it, easily could fit in some RPG game. Nice background but at the same time it catches your attention, probably like a boss theme in a game where the action is a bit more stressed. I like it a lot. Loops decently too, which is what it is meant for.
1st review 10/10 5/5 nice job especially for a first effort!
Thank you very much!! Yes this is probably a fight against a a boss or any fight scene.This is very useful for game makers.Thanks again for the review!
Ummmmmm
it was quiet at first, I figured "Okay it will get loud and pumping soon" it didn't. It bugged me because it starts nice, but then it stays quiet. The shame here is that you made it loud enough that you expect it too pick up at some point, but it's quiet enough that it just barley could've made an ambient song. Bummer man, not bad but I just didn't enjoy it.
Geez I think you broke my headphones!
That rocked! Way to dedicate your song to something worth dedicating it too. Respect that without a doubt, a nice song too. The bass was so deep that it felt like my head would burst at some parts, but in a kinda good way. Really good work.
1st review, 10/10, 5/5, I have a headache but rock on!
haha! yea thanks! real glad u like the bass and song itself =D
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